Thriving Fire

#EDITED# Thanks guys, I've tried to fix some of the problems (and the fact that there are many is sinking in pretty quickly...), some of which were easy, others not ...

A little hint? Oh alright, we'll go with that for the minute...

It's a mystery. Nobody really knows, or cares, who this guy is (and Mr. Everybody doesn't really help, does it? lol) or what this topic was really about. And if ...

OK, fair point. It makes sense when I'm singing it, but I'm not singing it now, so that's no excuse. Anyway, that line is meant to mean (does that make ...

I think nobody's replying because your own sense of good is different from everyone else's... No offence.

Thanks Mad. I'm going to try and edit the story whenever someone suggests something, and I've taken away some of the brackets, like you said. I would have taken them ...

Much better... I can now feel your pain, your journey etc. etc. Albeit you didn't change the 'gusty' bit, which didn't make much sense but overall its better then it ...

Thanks guys, and yeah, that first line just popped into my head and it stuck there. I loved it too, but then again, I am biased!